Try Me Out -- First Chapter Evaluation

$99.00

Benefits:

  • We get to know each other before you invest in one of my longer experiences and both of us get to show what we’ve got.

  • You get a deeply discounted evaluation of your first chapters.

  • Includes up to ten pages, double-spaced, 12-point type/NEW CLIENTS ONLY*

If you think you want to work with me but aren’t quite sure how this coaching thing works, this is the perfect option to help you make a decision. I’ll look at the first chapter, up to ten pages, of your work-in-progress and provide you with feedback on character arc, narrative drive, conflict and tension, POV and theme.

Here's what you get:

  • Feedback on your pages in the form of a one-page editorial letter and in-line comments to help you see examples of my analysis.

  • A thirty-minute call to discuss the feedback and suggested next steps.

  • *OFFER FOR NEW CLIENTS ONLY. Up to ten pages, double-spaced, one-inch margins, 12 point type.

Benefits:

  • We get to know each other before you invest in one of my longer experiences and both of us get to show what we’ve got.

  • You get a deeply discounted evaluation of your first chapters.

  • Includes up to ten pages, double-spaced, 12-point type/NEW CLIENTS ONLY*

If you think you want to work with me but aren’t quite sure how this coaching thing works, this is the perfect option to help you make a decision. I’ll look at the first chapter, up to ten pages, of your work-in-progress and provide you with feedback on character arc, narrative drive, conflict and tension, POV and theme.

Here's what you get:

  • Feedback on your pages in the form of a one-page editorial letter and in-line comments to help you see examples of my analysis.

  • A thirty-minute call to discuss the feedback and suggested next steps.

  • *OFFER FOR NEW CLIENTS ONLY. Up to ten pages, double-spaced, one-inch margins, 12 point type.

If you think you want to work with a book coach but aren’t quite sure how this coaching thing works, this is the perfect option to help you make a decision. I’ll look at the first chapter, up to ten pages, of your work-in-progress and provide you with feedback on character arc, narrative drive, conflict and tension, POV and theme.